Every minute, every day, people suffer and lives are lost needlessly because of a lack of safe water and sanitation. The Population is being viewed as the real problem and controlling birth rates should totally address the problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Potable water and proper sewage disposal are few of the basic needs of any human in this world. Unfortunately, most people doesn’t have access to drinkable water and clean surroundings which is resulting in human mortalities. Some would argue that this shortage is due to over population and the ultimate solution would be to control human births. I believe that controlling the birth rates may have solve the issue to some extent but, cannot be the holistic solution.
Firstly, though water is abundant on our planet, only a small portion of it is safe to drink or to cook food, and out of that small portion, humans waste a lot for no reason. For instance, the Metropolitan Authority of Boston revealed a shocking truth that more than half of the water they supply to the residential areas goes to waste. Secondly, more people migrate to cities to find employment every year which results in inadequate availability of sewage facilities to all the residents in such densely populated areas only. As we can see, the increase in population may be one of the contributors for the shortage of clean water and inadequate sewage disposal facilities, but cannot be the sole reason.
To continue, government authorities should focus on other ways to combat the problem besides controlling the rate of births. They need to create awareness among the public to reduce water wastage and to use waste disposal facilities sensibly. For example, state government of Nebraska has recently announced that the water consumption in their state has reduced by 25 percent and unwanted debris found in the sewage pipes decreased by almost 70 percent.
In summary, birth control could be one of the solutions to counter the shortage of clean water and to provide better sanitation to people in this world but, could not be the ultimate solution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 406, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'solved'.
Suggestion: solved
...at controlling the birth rates may have solve the issue to some extent but, cannot be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01960784314 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70909316622 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565359477124 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.6027464608 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182972712495 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647857776832 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416955104563 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106263576074 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013909715962 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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