Every year several languages die out. Some people believe that it is not important as life will be easier with fewer languages.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

Every year several languages die out. Some people believe that it is not important as life will be easier with fewer languages.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

language is the medium to understand the meaning of intentions between one another. Diverging opinion are rising whether languages, extinct or near to extinction are significant to us. However, some people consider that lesser languages would mean easy understanding between each other. I believe that languages represent more than just a way of communication and therefore, have more value to it than just mere words.

lingual history shows us the origins of different tribes of people. Their language study provides us the insight of how these tribes survived in past times. For instance, No one knew what the ancient writing on the walls of Egypt’s pyramid meant, until, recent research work done by the lingual experts. Their language has given us the information which has never been mentioned in the history books.

another advantage of having large number of languages is that it makes people humble and kind towards each other. In this age of far right phenomena, where nationalism is propagated, we need more traditional and local languages to defuse the situation. The racism and unjust nationalistic approach towards immigrants should be curbed, by celebrating more languages. Lastly, learning more languages enhances one’s mental capacity and enables them to think ideas in different languages. A study conducted between multi-lingual group showed their capacity to interpret ideas in more creative manner compared to bi-lingual people.

In conclusion, I believe local languages are worth saving and should be more promoted and celebrated for the peace and harmony among the masses.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50602409639 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80787520354 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6104341568 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.9285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119634379178 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419475189997 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267432468592 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747901250047 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217299330676 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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