Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree.
In modern society, an increasing number of people have a tendency to become a vegetarian. It is argued that people are supposed to solely eat plant food, as a vegetarian diet is commonly believed to be beneficial to human health. The following paragraphs will discuss the view and my perception.
It is reasonable to consider that becoming a vegetarian contributes to maintaining our health. First of all, medical science has demonstrated that having a vegetarian diet decreases the likelihood that a person will develop a variety of chronic conditions such as heart disease, diabetes, and obesity since plant food has high content fibre and vitamin that contributes to enhancing metabolism and low content fat. In addition, vegetables and fruits involve ample nutrition that provides people with sufficient energy to survive. Therefore, it is unnecessary to eat meat.
On the other hand, it is also worth mentioning that humans cannot maintain their health by merely consuming vegetable and fruit. Firstly, scientists have also discovered that several types of protein and vitamin could only be obtained from fish and meat. Salmon fishes, for instance, contain a particular kind of oil that contributes to blood circulation process, which can drastically reduce the risk of developing cardiovascular diseases. Furthermore, our body needs a broad range of nutrients in the right amounts to grow, develop and maintain itself since having a balanced diet allows our bodies to function optimal.
To conclude with my opinion, I agree with this view in some ways because vegetarians are less prone to various long term conditions. However, it is not appropriate for people to maintain health merely by consuming green foods, as we should have a balanced diet.
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In modern society,
In a modern society,
since plant food has high content fibre and vitamin that contributes to enhancing metabolism
since a plant food has ...
since plant foods have high contents of fibres and vitamins that contribute to enhancing metabolism
flaws:
Don't repeat verbs:
... becoming a vegetarian contributes to maintaining our health.
...contributes to enhancing metabolism and low content fat
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 279 350
No. of Characters: 1443 1500
No. of Different Words: 174 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.087 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.172 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.833 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 116 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.462 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.352 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.615 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.55 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32974910394 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90111432576 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627240143369 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9593742637 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184461074424 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638584735155 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04724232088 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112245665225 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026430547348 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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