This is said that humankind is responsible for destroying the environment. This essay will discuss the role of governments to tackle to solve the problem and the act of an individual as a host of our planet.
There are several reasons why the act of governments in societies are more important than others. The first reason is with the growth of the population and the Industrial Revolution in modern countries, many factories started to produce gas and waste, as a result, the air pollution, soil degradation and water pollution on the planet have been raised. Moreover, these advancements could not be denied, but the rulers of these countries should control the pollutants by introducing laws and some taxes to control the damage. Another reason why the government must address the problems is they have power, money, and force so this control is essential. For example, reducing the speed of Climate Change can be done by planting trees and using renewable energies around the world.
Wanting to help our Earth, people have some responsibilities which should be done immediately. In recent years, many publications, the news, and even the World Health Organization have been attracting people's attention to climate change and asking people to play the role of environment helpers and have the right behaviors. For example, in many countries instead of having plastic bags in hypermarkets, people prefer to use reusable bags, which can help the environment. Furthermore, using bicycles and public transportation rather than using private cars which emit gases can reduce exhaust fumes leading to a decrease in air pollution. Eventually, this responsibility of humans would help our environment.
To conclude, having discussed the reasons for damaging the environment which can affect our next generation and the solutions to save our planet, I strongly believe that both right governmental actions and individual ones should be taken.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, moreover, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30944625407 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97964247276 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57003257329 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1326288471 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.384615385 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19965840863 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670008580508 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379417108509 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113423187447 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277660028593 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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