Express your opinion about how modernism can affect our health. what can the government do to overcome such circumstances?
Discuss.
Gone are the days when people used to long walks on feet, muscular jobs at fields and many more physical activities. In today's era where modernism drew each and everything to its lap those effects human beings in both ways positive and negative. Tn this essay, I shall discuss the pros and cons of this modernism with my own opinion and share the ideas what can a government do to eradicate this nightmare.
On the positive side, the new fast era is making our life so quick, easy, and comfortable with new inventions. For instance, we are now used to phones, cars and many other household things which provide a comfortable lifestyle. However, such things are having more bad effects on our life. For example, nowadays, a major section of our society is lazy, dull, and suffering many life-threatening diseases. This is negative progress as we are living in such a bad lifestyle.
To plunge this nightmare, a government can introduce a bunch of effective measures with the help of local people and their community. To prove this, the government of the nation can create a law or start a campaign which bans the smartphones, motorbikes in the secondary level schools and motivate students to focus on more physical activities rather than wasting their precious time on phones and roaming on bikes. Furthermore, the government can provide more playground and create physical obstacles in order to achieve a job instead of online stuff that makes students lazy, couch-potato and hurt their back and eyes.
I think, no doubt modernism has changed our lifestyle to quick, and comfortable but we cannot turn a blind eye on its bad impact. People and the government must secure such steps towards its harmful effects now and create valuable opportunities for our loving society in order to protect this generation as well as our future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Gone are the days when people used to long walks...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97419354839 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72070719826 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577419354839 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9230769231 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.615384615 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18979289515 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626806095706 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529194058417 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11005625329 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322964844051 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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