during a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. you talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Remind him when and where you met.
tell him what kind of job you are interested in.
say why do think you would be suitable for this job.
Dear Mr. Tajinder Singh,
I hope you remember me as I sat next to you on the plane traveled to Toronto from London two weeks ago. We have talked on a business perspective and I was in search of a good restaurant for the position os restaurant manager. on behalf of our talk, you told me to contact you for such an opportunity as you are having a great chain of restaurants in multiple cities.
I am a graduate in hotel management and worked in some of the restaurants in India and Canada. My main interest in the position of a restaurant manager and serve this opportunity for long. such a position requires a bunch of good qualities like a fluent conversation with the guests, manage their sitting or accommodation and arranging the necessary stuff for their best visit to the restaurant. I love to take all these responsibilities with a happy face.
Five-plus years of experience in the field of restaurants like Sea Cafe and Indian Haveli made me a valuable person for your restaurants. I can manage and handle all the duties and requirements of a manager in any restaurant. Qualities such as polite, problem solving and adaptable and many more make me the best candidate for such a position. I would like to hear a positive call from you as my qualities, education and experience give me the confidence to serve this position deliberately and with full dedication.
Yours faithfully,
Ramneek.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81967213115 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00023234342 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561475409836 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.9171960042 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126228491478 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440526519209 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077657540889 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709322741587 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976105873611 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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