Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In this contemporary era, extreme sports are gaining popularity. Some people opine that these activities are extremely harmful and hence should be prohibited. However, I completely disagree with this notion as I believe that these adventures are a form of leisure and if given proper training can be enjoyed safely.
To begin with, extreme sports activities such as sky diving and skiing come with prior compulsory training. Before actually it, specialized trainers spend hours explaining meticulously each and every detail of the main event. Moreover, an exam is also conducted after the sessions to ensure that the individual is fit for attempting these high-risk games. For instance, in the snow-clad mountains of Switzerland, where skiing is the most famous activity, mandatory two-day training is included in the cost of the event. Hence, trainers are vigilant and careful to not let people go for these activities unless they are confident and perform well in the training, which justifies the safety of these sports activities.
In addition to this, sky diving and skiing are a form of entertainment. People usually opt for these sports in order to let go of their stress and tensions and to add a fun element in their rather mundane life. Furthermore, these activities once completed, develops a sense of achievement in an individual which goes a long way in building confidence. As an illustration, psychiatrists often recommend their patients, who are reticent or even depressed in life, to explore such extreme sports, so that they can forget their pain and come out elated and ecstatic. Therefore, the government should encourage such games in every country.
In conclusion, even though people believe that extreme sports are detrimental and should be discontinued, I personally feel that such activities are extremely important for boosting one's self-confidence, and if provided adequate training and guidance, it can no longer prove to be perilous and can become a favorite pastime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32807570978 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95139366349 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574132492114 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5536456935 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.642857143 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205557177424 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756490144161 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679746713331 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13117401673 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208484108704 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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