Fewer and fewer people walk daily.
What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time walking?
Undoubtedly, because of the rapid development of the technology the standard of living has been changed. That is why in this fast pace world people are less likely to walk regularly. This essay will discuss the causes and the measures which could be taken to come over this situation.
There are several reasons behind this situation, thanks to technology improvement. First, there has been decline in walking is because of the advancement in the transportation, which enables individuals to either choose public transport or drive their own vehicle to the destination. Not to mention the time individual saves by taking one of the fast commuting option. Besides, people have very busy and tiring lifestyle these days. Many of the professionals spend their most of the time in office, that is to say less time for doing any overexerting activity like walking.
On the other hand, it is imperative to encourage people to walk daily for their well-being. First of all, governments should develop and enact some laws or policies which will control the use of vehicle. For example, they can impose heavy tariff on petrol and also can raise public transport fares, which could significantly increase the popularity of active commuting such as walking. Furthermore, more public funds ought to be used for the construction and maintenance of footpaths, to provide attractive and safe walkways. Also, in schools, spreading awareness of benefits of daily walk would help educating kids at such a small age. Consequently, they would follow it in their later life.
In summary, it is certainly true that because of the enhancement in transportation and intense workload there is a dramatic decline in walking on regular basis. However, there are some actions can be taken to encourage individuals to walk daily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 602, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to educate' or 'educate'.
Suggestion: to educate; educate
...ss of benefits of daily walk would help educating kids at such a small age. Consequently,...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to encourage individuals to walk daily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, in summary, such as, first of all, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1843003413 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86710140646 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5352855547 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210027498688 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659954987047 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654342277289 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12598043763 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458867650235 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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