Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?
Many countries are facing a scarcity of fresh water from a long time, but it has now emerged as a global issue due to the uprising demand. This is happening because of the over usage of advanced machinery for use in daily work. However, this can be easily controlled by proper education and sagacious use. The following paragraphs of this essay will delineate pertinent reasons to support this understanding.
Various new electronic machines have been invented to support owners in household activities, but consume plenty of water. These devices follow protocols that function in a sequential manner and consume water separately for each phase, such as washing machine first inlets water for washing and then for rinsing. Furthermore, these do not focus on reusing existing water due to which plenty of water gets drained after each wash. To illustrate, a fully automatic washing machine requires nine liters of water per two kilograms of clothes. This is double the amount used if the same quantity is washed manually.
There are several measures that the government and individuals can take to curb this issue. A preponderant one is for the government to spread awareness about the problem and educate people on the ways to conserve water. At the same time, the public should use their wise judgment to limit the wastage such as avoiding the use of machines to the extent possible or running them at full capacity, so that the input water is used effectively. Similar measures have already been incorporated by many nations and deemed successful. For example, as per the recent report published in a lifestyle magazine highlights that China has reduced its water consumption to a substantial 40% in the last five years by adopting water conservation techniques.
To recapitulate, growing demands for clean water are on a continuous trend because of the high use of electronic devices to save human efforts. Nonetheless, it can be easily controlled by minimizing the use of automated machines and spreading awareness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a sequential manner" with adverb for "sequential"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, then, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19393939394 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80953544912 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593939393939 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5708267115 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.125 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165759628302 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581830207891 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427989692742 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100605096954 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333902498053 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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