In the future, we will have more and more leisure time as machines replace many of the tasks we do at home and at work. Discuss the benefits this will bring
Advancement in technology and globalisation has taken mammoth dimensions in the Global Village. Advocates are of the view that in the coming years, most of the word related to office and house will be done by the electrical and electronic equipments and people will be having extra time to enjoy their life. This essay in tends to elucidate the various challenges associated with this development and will also discuss advantages of it in the upcoming paragraphs.
Controllability of Machines is the top-notch challenge which will be faced by human beings. As most of the equipments are auto driven, there is a danger of losing controllability over them. Hence, it can be a cause of serious injury or even fatal death. For instance, drones used for clicking the photographs has reduced the manual effort but there are chances of major accident if sharp fan which is used to fly it lose controls. What is more, reliability is another fear in individuals mind. Although majority of electronic gadgets produces accurate results whilst, one cannot hundred percent rely on them. There are still the chances of errors which can drag the results from success to failure. Additionally, nobody can not neglect the dependency of these machines on energy sources in order to power up them. As fossil fuels are depleting at rapid pace, there is always a scarcity of energy sources in future to drive these equipments.
They are enormous benefits of the approach. Firstly, time saving is the major advantage which people will get. Although individuals have to give commands to operate machines whilst, there most of the time in doing any particular task like cleaning,cooking and dusting will be saved when electronic gadgets will be involved. Secondly, it will be cost-eduction program for industry and business houses if there will be automatic machines to do the work, there will be less requirement of labour, which in turn, reduce the operating cost. Finally, in offices tasks allocated to teams can be managed properly and any delay in project deadline can be communicated early using these communication devices.
In conclusion, despite there is a fear of losing control and accuracy of result from machines, nobody can neglect the advantages these will bring to the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12634408602 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83777655525 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561827956989 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2666249478 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.944444444 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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