Global warming is one of the most important issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measure can government and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Essay topics:

Global warming is one of the most important issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measure can government and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Global warming is one of the most concerning issues amongst people and scientists these days. There is a major well-known cause for this problem and its impacts are really horrible. So it is essential that government and citizens focus on solving this problem before further irrecoverable negative impact occurs.

The major cause of global warming is the high level of carbon footprint and greenhouse gasses emission in the atmosphere. It means, the sun’s radiation passes through the atmosphere and heat up the Earth. Most of these radiations reflected back to space but if the layer of atmosphere thickened these radiations would trap in the Earth and makes it warmer. Carbon dioxide and greenhouse gasses thickened the layer of atmosphere and cause a warmer climate for the worldwide.

Moreover, as carbon dioxide and greenhouse gasses caused global warming, reduction in these gasses emission could be a practical solution to tackle this problem. The role of government is highly critical in order to impose strict regulation for using renewable resources instead of fossil fuels, or recycling, or defining punishment for deforestation in order to absorb more carbon dioxide by trees rather than release it to the atmosphere. Individuals also are responsible to care the environment and reduce their carbon footprints by using public transportation instead of private cars or using efficient electric appliances or high mileage cars. Hence, the consequences of global warming are worldwide and each individual is responsible to be aware of this phenomenon influences

To conclude, the major cause of global warming is the emission of harmful gasses in the atmosphere and government and individual should pay attention to the implications of their harmful activities which produce these kinds of gasses and try to reduce them.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gasses'' or 'gas's'?
Suggestion: gasses'; gas's
...used global warming, reduction in these gasses emission could be a practical solution ...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, really, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42508710801 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88685578285 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529616724739 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.2701180617 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.545454545 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197775499124 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796045040329 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908702210795 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127177492937 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352800505211 0.056905535591 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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