Global warming is defined as the gradual increase in earth's temperature due to emission of dangerous gases that are unfavorable for the humans to survive. Although, this phenomenon has been observed from centuries, the world is facing more problems nowadays as compared to the past. This essay will discuss the causes behind this rise and put forward several solutions for this issue.
Two main reasons are behind this rise in global warming. The first is the practice of deforestation carried out for domestic and commercial purposes. Since it is true that forests maintain the environmental balance by releasing oxygen and take-up carbon dioxide from the surroundings, their depletion lead to the imbalance of environment; contributing to increase in warming. For instance, decades ago, 65% of the total area of earth was covered with trees and hence the environmental temperature was always maintained to the low. However, due to decrease in number of plantations, the degrees are now increasing day-by-day. The second factor, linked to the first is overpopulation as forests are cut down in order to provide food and shelter to humans for their existence. For example, it is clear from the results yielded by Environmental Organization that the living needs of ever-expanding population are responsible for the cutting of trees which increases the amount of pollution in the environment in the form of carbon dioxide; rising the earth’s temperature. Thus, these are the two major factors responsible for inclination in global warming.
However, tackling this issue involves the implementation of law by government under to stop the process of unusual deforestation and inspiring the individuals to plant more and more trees. In addition, government should take a strict action to decline the proliferating population. In china, for example, government has implemented a single-child law under which parents are allowed to have only one child throughout their life. And if someone disobeys this strategy, they are sentenced to jail. Thus, government and people both need to take actions in order to protect their lives and stop global warming.
In conclusion, unless efforts are made to shift the public consciousness, this problem will only escalate. In my opinion, handling this issue is challenging but not entirely impossible.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, thus, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39890710383 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05971894466 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562841530055 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0635773793 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.777777778 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134336911195 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413490065215 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413637561028 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805175701861 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460360181376 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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