In the current contemporary world, modernisation has influenced the family structure to a greter extent. Some parents, after getting older, encourage their young children to live away from them, while others opine that offsprings must reside in the same house with their family. In this essay, both the views will be discussed first and my opinion at the last.
Different people have different perceptions. Some individuals after reaching a higher age, consider it to be important for their young wards to get isolated from them. The major reason behind this belief is that the parents want their youngsters to broaden their horizon by expolring the society and become self dependent. For example, people who live alone rather than with their family are tend to be more self dependent and responsible as compared to those living with the family. Thus, young people should be given proper space in order to make them responsible.
On the contrary, another bunch of people believe that youngsters should live along with their family under one roof so that family members might get a chance to spend some quality time with each other. Moreover, they believe that younglings living away from their families are more likely to commit crimes. Also, isolated young people are more prone to mental diseases such as depression, stress, et ceterta, because there is noone with whom they can share their routine and tensions. That is why, younglings should live with their family and not away from them.
In my opinion, youngsters should reside with their parents as there nothing as important as family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09541984733 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37963860991 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6215458286 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.692307692 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202364882078 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780134822388 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478264837447 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143430743081 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314256741988 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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