In the past, students participated in sports more than playing games on computer as compared to present. However, nowadays, children spend most of their time in front of computers rather than playing any physical game. This essay will discuss why this is happening and put forward several solutions for it.
Two major reasons are behind the declination in interest of wards towards sports and their inclination towards computer games. The first is the advent of technology which provides various types of games that can be played on computers. Moreover, the internet has added fuel to the fire by offering the children online games that are played on worldwide scale. As a result, they spend a lot of their time by sticking to the screen of the computer or any other electronic gadgets like phone, tablets, et cetera. For instance, a survey conducted by World Sports Organization yielded a result that number of children taking part in sports is being declining with a great pace because of their inclining interest towards new technology of games. Secondly, the parents' negligence is responsible for this transformation of their wards. Most of the parents spend a lot of time in their offices due to which they are unable to keep an eye on their wards’ activities. Thus, the new technology and negligence of parents is responsible for the transformation of mindset of children.
Tackling this issue involves certain steps that should be taken in order to shift the interest of children. Firstly, schools should allot a game period of about an hour on regular basis so that students can participate in some kind of physical activity. Moreover, seminars should be conducted by teachers in order to teach giving them about importance of outdoor games. Also, parents should have a regular check on the time spent by their wards in front of computers and other gadgets. Moreover, they should encourage them to take part in physical activities by playing outside along with them.
In conclusion, until efforts are made to shift the public consciousness, this problem will escalate. It is the responsibility of schools as well as parents to change the mindset of students and encourage them towards sports.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06868131868 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74462924184 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9194992213 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235542283986 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748502003149 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061716392923 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155429854426 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771063902151 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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