Going to University is thought by many to be the best way to secure a good job, on the other hand, some people think that getting work experience and getting a skill is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion
Many believe that continuing higher education is an effective way to gain employment, while others think that gaining experience and practical skills are better in the long run. I agree with this because in certain cases it is not necessary
to go to university to get a good job.
On the one hand, some hold the view that professional jobs require university-level knowledge and understanding. This is because recruiters consider university graduates as a valuable human resource. For instance, If someone goes for an interview for a job as a Lawyer in a law firm then that person would certainly need to have completed a Law degree and have spent time in that field. Additionally, the quality and ranking of the university they attended would be a deciding factor in whether they would get the job they desire as many employers consider this fact.
On the other hand, others would argue that not all companies require a university degree to secure employment. I agree because certain jobs require practical skills and hands-on experience. For example, designing websites or being a software
programmer would require a person to be able to think for themselves, be innovative and have technical experience. Therefore, not all jobs require people to continue their higher education at university. I think that If someone has the experience necessary and aims for a job that does not require higher education, they should take the opportunity rather than spending four years at university.
To conclude, although views differ on the best way to gain employment, I believe that in certain fields practical skills and experience would give someone a much better chance of getting their desired job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
... in certain cases it is not necessary to go to university to get a good job. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Programmer
...esigning websites or being a software programmer would require a person to be able to th...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Experience
...sity. I think that If someone has the experience necessary and aims for a job that does ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19424460432 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90120792107 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517985611511 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0226393564 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260330772062 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101369951915 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521049484773 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156292228152 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952212044748 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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