Young people today are better qualified than they were in the past. Some people argue that this is because competition for jobs is greater than it used to be. Others say that people only continue their education because the opportunities exist for them to do so.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
These days, youth is highly educated than before. While some people tend to believe that it is due to the job market, others think it is because the rival for a good position has become more demanding than the last decade. I personally hold the later notion and this essay will examine both ideas.
To begin with, those who may believe that young adult continues their higher education only due to available opportunities. This is because the current job market only presents posts, which is requiring holding many certificates. In fact, big salary jobs demand that the applicant should already have a certain degree form a known university, and it may require a certain training course. To illustrate, jobs in the field of law always ask the applicant to hold a degree from Harvard University if he wants to be hired at an international law firm. Thus, job seekers should join courses to be more qualified.
Having said that, although some jobs demand highly educated applicants, I believe that the major reason behind this is that the number of candidates has significantly increased and the job market has not absorbed that increase. Since the beginning of the 2000s, recruiting in the exact type of jobs has been flourishing such as IT posts, whilst other fields like accounting started to be rare. As a result, the majority of applicants, who are applying for jobs in this sector, trying their best to be an excellent candidate by obtaining more degrees and gaining more experience. Hence, rising in competition between job hunters make them continue their education to win a dream job they seek.
In conclusion, despite the fact some jobs require certain types of university degree, the labor market, obviously, witness the high competition between applicants due to the limit number of posts available and I believe that investors should create more jobs to reduce this gab.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03174603175 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63349358947 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584126984127 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3435266374 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.923076923 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260672932211 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909594209052 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622464909699 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155892490111 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653765233268 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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