The overweight people count is increasing drastically in recent time. This growing number is creating a lot hazard in the health care system whereas keeping the health issues in control is becoming challenging every day. Few believes that introducing more physical education classes in schooling will improve it. Will this method really make an impact? This essay will discuss that it will have a moderate impact.
Education people is the best policy for spread awareness. Including lessons about the negative impact of being obese and healthy issues caused by obesity, will keep the young minds awake about the situation. For an instance, many youths are avoiding junk food by choice keep themselves healthy and also suggesting other elders at home to not to take it. Including physical training in school may take some time but will have an impact for sure.
Physical trainings demand a physical fitness. Youngs and mid aged people will be able to commit to the lessons easily, however, aged people will have to face multiple issues due to strength problem. Even, they are obviously not going to school at this age, so will not the lessons thought in school in any ways if they do not have someone studying in school. In my country many grandparents are staying alone as their next generation are staying away from them due to work relocation. So, the physical lessons given in institutes are not reaching to them.
In conclusion, this essay argued that including physical education in schools will help to keep the overweight health issues in control but has some limitations. So, I partially agree with information.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05576208178 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51904754435 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6993828596 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250573717236 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834252441466 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671175552933 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163159076247 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612829386208 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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