A growing number of people work by telecommuting that is the employee works from home using a computer and the Internet to connect with the office What are the advantages and disadvantages of working this way

Technology has changed the way that we used to do for work. Through the computer, internet and networking now we can work from home. It has more advantages and some disadvantages that we will discuss this essay.

Firstly, it will give more convenient time for work, we can adjust time-based on our convenience. Secondly, it will give more benefits to women with their young children. After giving birth to a child they will quit the job, but through work, from home option, they can start work after some time and give their time also to their child. Same like this, men can also save their time of commute and spend their time with loved once. Thirdly it will save organization resources and help in the environment because if less commute then less pollution and fresh air.

On the other hand, some drawbacks are also there for this. Firstly, working from home somehow become the cause of to limit the persons' teamwork skills. If we work from we are doing work alone and Many business problem's solutions need teamwork that entire teamwork in the same place. Secondly, it will stop your growth within the organization for the managerial place you have to work in a team environment. For this kind of position, you have to give your best performance in the team so they will recognize your work. Thirdly, we cannot give our full concentration on work while we are at home because there is always some distraction from our family members and also we need some help related work from our colleague that also not possible instantly in personal, have to send messages or send emails to our query and wait for there response.

In conclusion, many organizations now urge their employees to do work from home because of its advantages and their disadvantage we can cut through proper management skill and we have to learn how to improve our interpersonal and team skills.

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Average: 7.9 (5 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78395061728 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52105143751 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6016682208 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265630835185 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110837919162 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648137334051 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193703896307 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686188736944 0.056905535591 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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