Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People often compare the abilities of men, and women and claim those women are not as competitive as men. I do not agree with this opinion. In my opinion, women are just as competitive as men and they have proved their mettle in almost all spheres.
At school, girl students routinely outperform boy students. If they were not competitive, they would not be able to achieve this. In various competitive examinations also girls perform as well as boys. If we compare a female doctor or a female scientist with their male counterparts we can see that in terms of skills they are on a par with each other.
Women have already proved that they can do any job. They now work in almost every field. They even work in aviation and defence. Traditionally, these jobs were thought to be suitable for only men. Even in the conservative Arabian countries, women are now allowed to join armed forces. This is a clear indication that women are capable of doing justice to whatever role they perform. Women are also showing exceptional managerial skills. For instance, many multinational companies are successfully managed by women. Women have also proved that they can make excellent leaders. In countries like the United Kingdom, Germany and Bangladesh women are at the top political positions. Some of the most loved and remembered politicians in history are actually women. Obviously, women are not inferior to men in any field.
Yet, a question may arise why there are not many women in research, politics or business. In my opinion, this is not because they are not competitive. Women have certain biological and psychological duties that only they can perform. Giving birth and raising children are just some of them. Because of these reasons, many women quit their jobs and that probably explains why we do not see a lot of female politicians or business tycoons. In order to establish themselves in such fields, women have to dedicate their lives to their career. Unlike men, this is not always possible for a woman because her other responsibilities as a daughter, wife and mother stand in the way of her career goals. However, just because women are quitting their jobs to start a family and raise kids, it does not mean that they are less competitive than men.
In conclusion, after analyzing all aspects of the given situation, it is not hard to see that women are just as capable and competent as men. If there are fewer female achievers than male achievers, that is because women tend to sacrifice their career for the sake of their family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 680, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...men are at the top political positions. Some of the most loved and remembered politicians i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85779816514 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65615343713 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497706422018 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1058030388 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0344827586 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0344827586 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.37931034483 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206486487389 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619258578736 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557504376274 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134121990618 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842169346122 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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