The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree.
We are now living in a 4.0 industrial revolution that allows us to purchase almost everything with just one click. Online shopping becomes popular as a global trend and some people might think that all the stores are going to disappear but as far as I concerned the store still have an irreplaceable role.
First of all, online purchases can not replace the customer’s experience. For example, when people buy clothes online, most of them might confuse about the quality that just can be felt by their hands. Sometimes, the color of the clothes when we see on the website might have a bit different compared to reality.
Moreover, many companies or stores now already aware of customer’s needs. They try to figure out their selling point, combine many convenience services for customers who come to the store like a promotion campaign or making a great experience. For example, some of the bookstores might include a coffee shop so people could meet up with their friends, reading books or self-study.
Furthermore, as a marketing strategy, a store in a favorable position could attract audiences and their brand will be recognized by huge target customers. It helps increase their profit and even their reputation.
On the whole, the store provides not only the goods but also it bring us real experience. So we could say that people tend to shop online but stores might still be maintained and developt.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 263, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...making a great experience. For example, some of the bookstores might include a coffee shop ...
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Line 17, column 65, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...provides not only the goods but also it bring us real experience. So we could say tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, for example, first of all, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04621848739 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77058708834 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4129607757 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.083333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0939636472656 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352970899549 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421726986144 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555178938059 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333053847156 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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