It is true that online shopping have become popular in this modern society which might lead to the traditional shop closing. People have changed the way of shopping from substance shop to online shopping. I believe that online shop have huge potential trend to impact the traditional shop.
On the one hand, people are enjoyed for purchase thing from home by shopping online. There are various products that consumers can be found by simplify use their computer though internet and they don’t even need to walk out the door and spent time for search things in the shopping mall. In addition to, the reason that local shop might be disappeared in the future because it is getting more difficult to afford and mange it. People who want to open a store, they need to consider the business of spending, such as rental fee, employee’s wage and bills. According to those business of spending is increasing every year which mean those shops will force to be closed.
On the other hand, online shop is easy to manage it, people who willing to open an online store is affordable. you only need to apply an online store through a shopping website, and upload your products on your homepage. There is no rental fee and employees wage to worries and there is only a little fee that you will be charge for advertising your products. For example, yahoo shopping centre, people who want to sell their product, they can apply a yahoo account which provide the salesman a webpage to upload their product and there is a little fee to charge for advertising it.
In conclusion, although we are more familiar with traditional way of shopping, I believe that online shopping will lead the trend to change the way people used to shopping.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77333333333 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38717871602 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8321341515 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262866007974 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115804540567 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677647459196 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174455878945 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607112340965 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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