In the past decade, there has been an enormous growth in customers buying products online, and this growth is somehow responsible for a decline in shops in towns and cities. With innovative technology and the proven better customer experience in online shopping, it is evident that, in the future, most customers will prefer to choose online merchants for their daily necessities, and it will result in the decline in small stores in the market.
With the numerous benefits of online shopping, people find it more convenient to purchase merchandise using online platforms, and choosing products and services from a wide range of options. This results in fewer customers choosing small shops in the market for buying goods for their daily use. Secondly, with lucrative discounts offered in online shopping applications, more customers are attracted to online platforms. For example, different mobile applications, like Amazon, provide a wide range of products for customers, also offers all after sales facilities that a customer expects from a reliable shopkeeper. For the above reasons, people are rejecting the idea of going into their local market and relying on e-commerce for their necessities.
On the other hand, in spite of many advantages of internet shopping, there will always a small proportion of individuals who will prefer to visit supermarkets, as the traditional shopping method makes them feel more confident while buying any product. This is because, when they visit any shop run by a small seller, they evaluate the product and service in real-time, and ensure the optimum quality of the item. Furthermore, while shopping in the market, individuals can enjoy the outing with their peers, and feel the outside world. For example, in order to purchase jewellery, people always prefer to visit the shop so as to ensure the quality and genuineness of the article.
In conclusion, on one hand, because of multiple benefits of internet shopping, people are choosing to shop from their homes than in stores, however, there will always a small proportion of people who will stick to the traditional shopping method to ensure better customer satisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 620, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... people always prefer to visit the shop so as to ensure the quality and genuineness of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28901734104 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74947104588 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491329479769 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3685607917 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.5 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191409794951 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808046234335 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479551945594 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133436590222 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279513510484 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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