It has been debated for a long time that the primary objective of an architect is to build a structure useful rather than attractive, so that its sole purpose can be served. I disagree with this statement because for effective operations or services in any building, it is imperative to make it beautiful, so that people would enjoy the ambience and atmosphere inside such structures and the efforts of builders can be well recognized by the people.
When architects put their efforts in developing a building that looks attractive, it results in an influx of visitors as it is a human tendency to appreciate beautiful things. Furthermore, apart from the core services of any building, people get an opportunity to enjoy other services, like watching television in the waiting room, sitting in the garden area or eating in the cafeteria. In other words, People feel much satisfied when they encounter these kinds of attractions. For example, in suburbs of Indian states, people refrain from visiting government hospitals and prefer to go to private medical buildings as they feel much comfortable in a relaxing atmosphere when they see attractive facilities, like water fountains and adequate space in the waiting area, around them.
Secondly, with an increasing number of visitors in any government or private structure due to beautiful attractions, more revenue is generated which helps the organization to improve their services for mankind. Consequently, people appreciate the hard work of builders and service providers for such outstanding facilities. Many government offices in Delhi, for example, have revamped their office premises with garden areas and beautiful paintings on the walls. Such strategy has proven to be successful for many states to attract people to opt government services rather than going with private service providers.
In conclusion, ensuring the core services and functions operational of any building, it is of utmost importance that the structures should be eye-catching so as to attract more visitors and the hard works of the builders are well recognized. This helps not only in surging revenue of the department but also ensures better services for mankind.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...t the structures should be eye catching so as to attract more visitors and the hard work...
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Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...rk of the builders are well recognized. this helps not only in surging of revenue of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27167630058 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90433524574 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534682080925 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2308381163 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.0 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147900144005 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058206513674 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417016816572 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916955202411 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141980235064 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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