Some developing countries invite large multinational companies to open offices and factories in order to help their economy However others feel that foreign companies should be shut out and instead the government should help the local companies to contrib

It has been debated for a long time whether to openly promote multinational companies to establish their business in your country or support national organizations to flourish and expand their business nationwide. I certainly agree with the latter viewpoint and opine that helping local companies of the nation at expanding their businesses will eradicate the dependency on foreign firms, and it contributes is to the local economy.

With better government policies and ease in doing business, local companies expand their reach to all the regions of the country, and it eliminates the dependency on foreign products made in multi-national companies. Furthermore, a product made by a state-owned company contributes less tax as compared to a foreign organization, and this results in less cost of production, and goods and services are made available by local companies at a much lower cost. This benefits not only the people of the community to have low priced products but also hinders the monopoly of foreign companies. For example, in countries like India, the government has introduced better policies for small scale businesses to promote indigenous products and eradicate the dependency on foreign firms.

Secondly, country-based companies provide better job opportunities to the local people of the region, and these jobs are much easily available for the citizens of the country. Despite the high standard of local firms, the entry-level requirements, like academic background and past job experiences, are much favourable to a large group of people. This results in the downfall of unemployment and creates an opportunity for an underprivileged group of society to earn money and live a respectful life. Some Indian government companies, TATA consultancies LTD., for example, hire un-experienced college graduates and provide good salary packages as compared to multi-national companies.

Taking all this into consideration, whether to allow foreign companies to establish their business in your country, or promote local companies is a long debatable topic. I strongly believe that helping the country based companies made a nation independent, and provide better job opportunities to a larger group of people.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1207.87684729 157% => OK
No of words: 340.0 242.827586207 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56176470588 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17655092491 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502941176471 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 379.143842365 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.931034482759 752% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.0603131915 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.583333333 104.977214359 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.9669160288 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238343330174 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955855851182 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608159257865 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167536177718 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582172065251 0.0609392437508 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 12.6369458128 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 53.1260098522 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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