The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that in the last ten years, E-Commerce industry is growing dramatically. More and more people are buying products from an online platforms. This has raised a question that will outlets in cities be closed permanently in coming future. I believe this notion is foreseeable because abundance of options to choose from and comfortable experience offered by an online stores.
To begin with, Online shopping provides a comfort to consumers to purchase from anywhere irrespective of the city they live in. One can buy products by sitting on the chair at home. There is no need to travel to the shop and stand in the long queues to pay bills and later lift bags. Specially, during festive seasons shops in local market and stores in the malls are flooded with customers. People can order goods from their smart devices without any physical strain. For instance, as per the result of latest survey, in Mumbai more than 70% people buy groceries online, because they do not want to pickup heavy bags. Therefore in the coming years there is a great possibility that all customers will shift to an online portals.
Furthermore, Online portals offer plethora of products to consumers and with the help of 3D modelling customer can try products virtually. This is really a biggest breakthrough in an online shopping. Consumers can try variety of cloths on themselves. However, after buying a product if customer is not satisfied with it they can easily return to the seller or can request for an exchange. For instance, my friend purchased jeans from Myntra by trying it virtually and later found that it was not fitting him, but he requested for an exchange, he received really a good support from customer service while replacement. This way variety of option and customer friendly policies are attracting customers toward buying online.
In conclusion, with booming of online shopping platforms, in coming years hops in the cities will certainly shut down permanently. I think this is because seamless comfort and variety of options available at an online websites.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'platform'?
Suggestion: platform
...ople are buying products from an online platforms. This has raised a question that will o...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'store'?
Suggestion: store
...ortable experience offered by an online stores. To begin with, Online shopping prov...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...strain. For instance, as per the result of latest survey, in Mumbai more than 70% people ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... they do not want to pickup heavy bags. Therefore in the coming years there is a great po...
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Line 3, column 722, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'portal'?
Suggestion: portal
...t all customers will shift to an online portals. Furthermore, Online portals offer...
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Line 6, column 155, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... try products virtually. This is really a biggest breakthrough in an online shopp...
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Line 8, column 219, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
...riety of options available at an online websites.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04927536232 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65886382047 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576811594203 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8243993091 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6842105263 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151996386734 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507048642512 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531302520242 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110730072124 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624464300506 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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