In the last few decades, online shopping is improving and effects on traditional trading. For this reason, many believe that normal or traditional shops have to close. In this essay, I will argue with two main reasons why I disagree with this belief.
First of all, many people prefer to compare their purchase by touching the material and choose the best product in terms of quality especially in clothing and accessories classified. Because of that online shopping not be a good idea for them. For instance, in the past I bought a shoe for my mother in online shopping and that was too small and uncomfortable. I know many people that they have a bad experience of online shopping like me. In addition, the traditional shops don't have time limits in contrary to online shopping because the delivery time of the product must be specified. Traditional shops will never close because they will always have their own applicants, it may only have fewer applicants at times like the Corona epidemic.
Second of all, many claims that in online shopping numerous banks cheating happens. Therefore, people do not trust online shopping. To illustrate that, we see in the news a number of fake and unreliable shops picked up the customers' bank card number and get their purchased products in low quality in comparison with the photos of products. As a result, many people prefer to buy in traditional stores and don't risk online shopping.
To conclude, it is a fact nowadays online shopping has its own following and every day are more popular. However, a number of people are shop lover and go shopping and spend a lot of time on it. Hence, the traditional stores will always be available around the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in addition, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82876712329 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59692934716 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544520547945 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7578564374 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294573936715 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108309318485 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477333697245 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18510363978 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272802772591 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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