We are living in the Digital World. A place where almost everything is done or available at finger tip. Online shopping is a part of digital and modern life. This essay argues in the favor of side effects of online shopping by giving reasons such as convenience of home delivery, easy returns and lack of awareness of local shops availability.
A majority of people prefer online shopping due to the convenience it provides. People do not need to go out in crowd. They neither need to bargain nor argue with the shopkeepers for refund or change request. Thus customers do not visit their near by shops. Besides, online platforms provide a huge collection and variety of products whereas, in local towns, one needs to visit too many shops to find unique items.
Second but equally important point in this argument is lack of information about shops available in vicinity. The generation is not aware of the local shops in their town. Moreover, they feel lazy to go out in market. Only the old generation prefer local shops for purchasing anything. As a result, a big percent of customers are attracted towards online purchasing. Additionally, online businesses lure customers by discounts on various festivals and occasions whereas, local businesses stick to their fix price slogan mostly.
Above discussed points prove how the interest of customers towards online apps and websites for shopping will lead to closing of local shops. The future of local shops is in danger hence, movements like ‘Vocal for Local’ are getting in trends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, moreover, second, so, thus, whereas, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54324836477 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602678571429 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.003737215 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26559561677 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830030140121 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689662410417 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156257643432 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150715461113 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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