Human activity has had a negative impact on the plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Interference of people with the environment is creating hazardous effect on the plants and animals on the Earth. It is argued by some that this can never be altered because humans have become habituated to harming the environment. However, I believe that by imposing fine this situation can be changed.
It has become a habit for human beings to throw garbage and pollute the environment. But it is said that changing human behavior is one of the most difficult task to accomplish. People cannot change their habit of polluting the atmosphere because they have not trained their minds to take necessary actions to maintain and keep the atmosphere clean. A study done by the Cambridge university states that 80% of people pollute the environment even when they know what harm it can cause to the environment.
On the other hand, government can impose fine on people spreading pollution. This will create a sense of fear and will tend people to change their behavior in order to save themselves from paying the fines. For example, the government of India have imposed strict laws for polluting the environment by declaring a hefty fine and this has led to significant decrease in pollution.
In conclusion, the flora and fauna are getting negatively affected because of humans and this situation can be changed if states impose monetary punishment on people polluting the atmosphere. It is predicted that the Union Nations will be taking a big step by asking the countries to make strict laws for saving the environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73915041681 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531496062992 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6443901348 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.833333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211957666472 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880780128054 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594458609388 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145189383654 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742990513544 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.