The invention of technologies brings human activity to explore and exploit the world for self-supporting countries. However, there are some problems around the masses to the argument that the human activity which utilizes the planet will increase or decrease the environment. This essays will explain from both views.
To begin with, uncontrolled industrialization from human behavior to exploit the planet resource bring to the deterioration of the environment. Illegal logging, free land space, and side products from industry are the main consent for people to manage it because it will damage not only the environment but also the human. For example, In China, there are some industries which throw the side effect products to the environment without split it between damaging chemical and degradable chemical. As a result, the high pollution gives disadvantage to the inhabitant around the industry such as the reducing in m=number of oxygen, the visual limitation for people because of smog, and the revelation of diseases. This is why the environment shall be protected because people are living on the planet.
On the other hand, human activities in the term about industrialization can be managed by using controlled regulation. The government and community shall analyze what is the best standard that gives an opportunity for both the environment and industry. There are some explanations to the role this human activity, firstly the permission to build the new industry shall be appropriated to the regulation. Secondly, the industry must have a system which safety and green to the environment. Thirdly, the government must give punishment and reward for the company as a result of their care to the environment. These requirements shall be compelled among the companies.
In conclusion, human activity take responsibility for the environment. As long as it can be governed, it will give advantage to the people and the environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3954248366 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12149671204 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516339869281 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1329176809 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228340534673 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835183243446 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618149866696 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156748522906 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351520499532 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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