An increasing number of people are choosing plastic surgery. Why do people choose to change the way they look? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, more and more people are undergoing cosmetics surgery. The reason why they decide to alter their looks can be a lack of self-assurance and to compensate for their needs to being seen in society. I, for one, disagree entirely with the given statement on the basis of compelling reasons.
To begin with, people get plastic surgery for various reasons. Firstly, along with basic needs, people crave a positive image of themselves and whether their attractiveness is seen or not. Lacking self-confidence in most cases, these individuals think of any possible outer way to improve their appearance. The inevitable outcome will sometimes be undergoing plastic surgery in order to look more good-looking. Secondly, these cosmetic surgeries are usually gotten by those who are not feeling unattractive. To put it differently, they genuinely do not need these operations to look better because they already do. However, due to some inner emptiness and obsessions that ought to be filled at any cost, we witness many undergoing these so-called beauty surgeries every day.
On the other hand, the irremediable problems brought about by these unmanageable surgeries should be highlighted. First and foremost, there could be irreversible physical repercussions by going through them. Take the ones who have done nose job for only appearance purposes as an example; many of them end up having difficulties inhaling and breathing. Moreover, there is no guarantee about whether you are going to be satisfied with your new look. There could even be some malfunction in operation by your doctor that can not be disregarded by any means. As a result, these surgeries are not recommended at all.
In conclusion, the primary culprits behind cosmetic surgery are low self-esteem and not considering themselves as valuable people just the way they are now. Regardless of some fake attractiveness, these surgeries bring about, I am completely against this trend since they are problematic for the patients.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, in most cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32278481013 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01475169259 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629746835443 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5181589335 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4444444444 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198823813579 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604945189139 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526632475465 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117575728913 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062915614577 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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