An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
Brain draining, migrating of skilled educated workers, is the biggest challenge to overcome for under-developed and developing countries. This results the lack of skill labours in the countries which play an important role in the rate of development. In this essay, the root causes of educated people migrate to developed countries and the possible preventive actions are discussed.
First of all, the majority of people are migrating because of attractive job opportunities. They can have a higher salary for the same amount of work in the home countries which is important to support their families. In addition, better education, healthcare and housing system in developed countries are also drawing the attention of people to migrate and some countries such as Canada and Australia, even have skilled migration scheme to attract skilled labours to migrate and support their economy.
There are two methods to protect the skilled workers migrating out of the countries. The first method is creating job openings with a competitive salary which is not necessarily to be the same as salary offered in developed countries because most people understand that migrating is not an easy process and if they can have a salary to cover their monthly expenses, they will remain in the country. Secondly, authorities can also develop a special income tax scheme and a tax relieved scheme which will, in turn, attract people not to move out from the country.
To conclude, under the globalization effects, migrating is a massive issue to solve for the continuing development of a country. It can be done either by promoting the special benefits on the tax or improving the basic income of the skilled workers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20289855072 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84350817695 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507246376812 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5824670347 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.545454545 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151070634238 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637331203181 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409268815813 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969877136257 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465819315319 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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