Individual should handle climate change or it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Combating climate change has become an absolute necessity to live safely in today’s world and there are different opinions about the responsibility of tackling climatic variations. It is believed by some that government ought to deal with climate change while others argue that citizens also have the duties to tackle this. From my point of view, the state should be responsible for macro duties and individuals should perform micro duties.
On the one hand, it has often been pointed out that the scope of state to control climate change is larger. In other words, it is the government who could draft and implement new policies to reduce the negative impact of climate change. For instance, Bangladesh is vulnerable to sea level rise, especially low lying coastal regions, and the government should have policies to protect land and crops from extreme weather change. Furthermore, stringent rules and regulations should be enacted and implemented to discourage owners from establishing businesses that are not environmentally friendly. Likewise, a large scale divestment from industries, which are extracting fossil fuels, is also needed. Lastly, the fund for adapting climate change needs to be arranged and the state ought to take proactive approaches regarding this.
On the other hand, climate scientists postulate that a concerted approach is imperative to tackle climate change; hence, responsibility of every individual could not be ignored. Research suggests that if we reduce, reuse, and recycle the products, wastages could be reduced in a great extend. In addition, Individual must choose green products, which are less damaging to the environment and this will ultimately force businesses to make environmentally friendly products. Finally, to avoid dire consequences, natural disasters, of extreme weather change, people from all walks of life need to campaign against climate change so that awareness can be created to use clean energy and green products.
To conclude, Climate change is inevitable and it has become an emergency to combat this change. There is no blanket solution to this problem unless both the government and individuals work responsibly. I believe that the state should work sincerely in order to make major decisions regarding climate change and every individual must co-operate the government by observing rules and regulation if we want to live peacefully in this beautiful world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to green'
Suggestion: to green
...nd. In addition, Individual must choose green products, which are less damaging to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, likewise, regarding, so, while, for instance, in addition, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48138297872 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89387978899 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.675173125 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.8125 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23921375242 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803145413978 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048412841505 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159457180615 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575589514036 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.