You and your friend booked a theater tickets in advance. Apology to your friend as you can't make it to the theater with him.
In the letter, you should:
• apologies
• explain what reasons you can’t make it
• give options what can be done with the ticket.
Dear Lisa,
I am writing to apologize for not being able to go with you in theater on Friday.
I am terribly sorry but I really wanted to watch the show together with you in theter. The reason why I would not be able to accompany you in theatre is my boss who appointed me to arrange a meeting with buyer on Friday. You know that my boss is not an easy-going person! I have tried to convince him but no positive advice I have received from him.
I feel really apologetic that I will not able to accompany you. Please don’t be mad at me and I promise that this will not happen in future.
Would you prefer to reschedule the date? How about next Sunday? I will be available whole day and we can fix the date if you agree. Another option could be to cancel the ticket and buy new tickets for football match between Barcelona and Real Madrid on Sunday. I know you are a great fan of Barcelona. I will pay full price of tickets as compensation. Agree?
I humbly ask your forgiveness again and please let me know your decision by Thursday.
Your loving friend,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 136, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...and I promise that this will not happen in future. Would you prefer to reschedule the ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e of tickets as compensation. Agree? I humbly ask your forgiveness again and p...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37623762376 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40010701327 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623762376238 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9575288021 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.1428571429 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328359750532 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102647955154 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595060140579 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156873741238 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686586674542 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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