Dear Igor,
I am writing to express how sorry I am as I will not be able to make it to our theatre plans. Allow me to explain why I am not in a position to do so.
As you know, me and my wife are expecting our first child and the delivery date has been moved up by 2 weeks by the doctor. Due to some impromptu changes in my wife’s body, the doctor stated that she will be kept under observation and if needed she will be operated early next week. I have been shrieking in my head ever since. Also, it hit me yesterday that we had a plan to watch the theatre next week.
However, I would like to tell you that I would have not missed this chance to watch the theatre with you as it will not be happening again for another 2 years in our city, but the situation has constrained me to change the plans. As such, I want you to go ahead and watch it as we had planned and if you want, I can ask a friend of mine to come with you to see it or in the alternative, you can take one of your friends.
I hope you will empathize with me and understand the severity of the issue in my life.
Thanking you,
Brad Jason
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 3.94298245614 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20010684846 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0689305443 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2579890113 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927401988587 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102178152481 0.0603063233224 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13884814755 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115134483564 0.0580467560999 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.87 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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