You and your friend booked a theater tickets in advance. Apology to your friend as you can't make it to the theater with him.
In the letter, you should:
• apologies
• explain what reasons you can’t make it
• give options what can be done with the ticket.
Dear Mat,
Hope you are doing well. Firstly I would like to apologize as I won't be able to make it to the theatre tomorrow due to some official commitments. let me explain in detail.
To elucidate unfortunately a product launch has come up, therefore, I need to immediately travel to Japan for a few days. Although I tried my best to avoid this business travel however I am the only resource who has an in-depth knowledge of the product. Hence the company management needs me to be present at the seminar and address all the technical questions related to the product from the customers.
I can understand how disappointed you would feel after hearing this news as we had made advance bookings and had been planning for the show for a long time however I have a suggestion to offer. Before penning down this letter I spoke to the customer care executive of the booking centre and they advised that the change of dates on the tickets would be possible free of cost, therefore, I would suggest getting the dates changed to next week.
let me know what you think.
best wishes
Saud
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
Dear Mat, Hope you are doing well. Firstly I would...
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Suggestion: Let
...orrow due to some official commitments. let me explain in detail. To elucidate ...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...s an in-depth knowledge of the product. Hence the company management needs me to be p...
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Suggestion:
...ated to the product from the customers. I can understand how disappointed you wo...
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...getting the dates changed to next week. let me know what you think. best wishe...
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...ing the dates changed to next week. let me know what you think. best wishes ...
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Suggestion: Best
...week. let me know what you think. best wishes Saud
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...et me know what you think. best wishes Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61855670103 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57490608645 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670103092784 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8783012628 44.8134815571 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151848497753 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564464173519 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566579893315 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108451321285 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648372255664 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.