You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
1. say why he / she would not enjoy going to college
2. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him / her
3. suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him / her
Dear Mike,
Hope you are doing well. I have received your letter asking for a suggestion on whether to go to college or try to get a job. I am aware that you are at a crucial juncture in your career, making a wrong move at this stage would hamper your future prospects.
As you have recently completed your tertiary education, going to university again will put you in a similar environment which will make you feel distracted and bored moreover considering your present financial situation, continuing your education means the extra burden for your parents thus I will recommend going for a job.
Once you start working it will make you independent and financially stable. Nowadays most of the graduates find a job first as it strengthens their profile before they start pursuing their post-graduation. The industry experience they get in invaluable while applying for their higher studies.
Since you are a computer engineering graduate, you can find jobs in software companies and specifically look at software testing or design jobs.
I hope you take my advice seriously and make the right decision.
Warm wishes
vinshu
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, Hope you are doing well. I have received...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...age would hamper your future prospects. As you have recently completed your tert...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...make the right decision. Warm wishes vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10695187166 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81127831553 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663101604278 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.8826928335 44.8134815571 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306076235904 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114464600952 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114861244972 0.0603063233224 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157919026774 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920150850943 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.