Individual should take care of the environment or it is the government’s responsibility.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
As a result of human activities, pollution is the biggest problem of the world, which is a threat to the survival of human. The question is who should look after the environment? Citizens or the governments? In my opinion, environmental degradation affects every living soul on the planet so it requires equal participation from both rather than playing a blame game.
To begin with, every single activity by human, as insignificant as cutting a small tree, has a great impact on the environment. Moreover, the price, which we may have to pay for the negligence towards the nature, will not discriminate based on the individual impact of our actions. For instance, hazardous gas emitted from single car will have the dangerous impact on the whole surrounding. Furthermore, people have to understand that nature is not a private property, which we are continuously degrading to satisfy our greed, it is a heritage borrowed from future generation to preserve it for them. So every individual should understand their moral duties to protect our continuous existence on the planet.
In addition to this, industry waste is also a major cause for pollution, which cannot be controlled by public. The government should employ strict regulation on wastage control and ban on perilous material such as plastic, which can force corporation towards environment friendly initiatives. For example, poisonous gases from factories contributes to 30% of the total air pollution. Government’s Eco-friendly policy and investment to identify clean energy resources will acts as motivation for citizens when their leaders set up an example for them to follow. Thus authority’s intervention is essential to limit the waste disposal from Giant Corporation and public encouragement.
In conclusion, Governments initiatives are ineffective without individual participation. Thus both the parties should coordinate with each other to preserve the nature to ensure the quality of surrounding.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'act'
Suggestion: act
...to identify clean energy resources will acts as motivation for citizens when their l...
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Line 5, column 567, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...s set up an example for them to follow. Thus authority's intervention is essent...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ctive without individual participation. Thus both the parties should coordinate with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51803278689 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24113576266 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629508196721 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5039490045 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.1875 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141140567987 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503164792156 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459268812153 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949073768848 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379565791217 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.