Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?
With recent developments in technology, especially in medical science, several vaccination have been invented to prevent deadly diseases by immunizing children from early age. However, it has not been effectively utilized by people so the question is whether to employ law and enforcement to force parents to provide early dose of medicines. In my opinion, effectiveness of such laws is highly doubtable unless the real issues is identified and proper actions are taken to resolve them.
To begin with, nobody wants harm for their offspring, especially regarding their health. Then why do some parents do not provide necessary vaccine doses to their children? The obvious answer is the lack of awareness about the illnesses and required medical assistance that is advised during initial days of child’s life until it becomes beyond curable. Further, the price of the medicine is also a huge issue, which sometime cost them a fortune. For instance, 90% of cases of polio, which were registered in India, in 1990, came from poor rural background. Thus, it is difficult to encourage people towards immunization just by enforcing laws.
Moreover, every parent is entitled to have freedom to choose the best for their kids. It is everybody’s fundamental right, which cannot be violated under any circumstances. Otherwise, there is no difference between democracy and dictatorship. Thus, making strict laws to push parents for medical assistance, which is costlier and people are unaware of, is not acceptable at all.
On the other hand, Governments can run continuous awareness programs to educate people about the cure for those disease and try to make it available for free or as minimum cost as possible. The excellent example of impact of above actions is the polio free India since 2001. Authorities had continuously ran polio awareness advertisement and supplied medicines for free of cost to achieve that goal.
In conclusion, forcing people to immunize their child by laws is not as effective as the other approaches if we really want to immunize future generation from curable diseases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun vaccination seems to be countable; consider using: 'several vaccinations'.
Suggestion: several vaccinations
...hnology, especially in medical science, several vaccination have been invented to prevent deadly di...
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this disease' or 'those diseases'?
Suggestion: this disease; those diseases
...ms to educate people about the cure for those disease and try to make it available for free o...
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Line 7, column 305, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'run'.
Suggestion: run
...ince 2001. Authorities had continuously ran polio awareness advertisement and suppl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, then, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30746268657 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90054342317 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644776119403 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8482718714 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.588235294 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197106374234 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055059351989 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551849119051 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105379753661 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394161247724 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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