Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Vaccines are the best forms to cure any disease. The infections or illness can be treated in your infant age with the usage of vaccines being used at the right time. I have an inclination that the role of law should be put in picture to save the child being prone to immense diseases.
There are many factors which influence the fact that the law’s interference is important in the immunization of a child. If a mandate law would be passed, the parents will have no choice than to vaccinate their child at the right time and age. The government would also assist with various policies and camps at a subsidized rate or free of cost services to save the future of the child at an early age. Various awareness sessions could also be organized for parents. Researches show that still, 30% of the children around the globe suffer from various non-curable diseases which would have been cured if the child would have been immunized at an early age.
However, it is the right of the parents to make a choice of the immunization. But, there is also a possibility that the choice could be led by the monetary factor, unawareness of the parents to the new diseases.
To conclude, Government and law should play a vital role to make the parents aware of the diseases that a child could be a victim. A mandate decision will definitely move the parents to get the same done. To keep a check on it, a health card should be issued which records the immunization done throughout life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 621, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had been'?
Suggestion: had been
...hich would have been cured if the child would have been immunized at an early age. However, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61509433962 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55612959468 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51320754717 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7260445564 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0769230769 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285187015981 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097626382221 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677034522993 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167940625215 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586579791419 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.