Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it causes problems. Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics: Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it causes problems. Do you agree or disagree?

Megha Gupta's picture

Working at any age of life is always good but there are many people who believe that if individuals will be allowed to work after the age of 60 will create trouble. I completely agree with the statement and there are various reasons to support.
Firstly, if the people will work after 60, there will be less scope of the new workforce to avail the new opportunities. Unemployment will curb the market and there will be a rage among candidates. Secondly, If there will be no retirements, the possibilities of the promotion will also be hindered. The growth of the employees might get delay provided that there is a new place in the organization. New employees will give new direction and ideas to the country. If people will be allowed to work after the retirement age, the health may not support and this could lead to severe health issues. Researches have shown and have been proved that after the age of 60, health and the memory of the person starts deteriorating.
However, this is also certain that if humans keep on working, they keep themselves engaged and are not trapped on isolation. Although many organizations believe that an experienced person can take more wise decisions compared to a new joiner. The people will remain healthy as work will make them happy and involved.
To capitulate, we cannot deny the fact that the age of 60 has been set after many surveys and researches on any human being working capacity. The government should also participate in laying strict measures for the individuals working after the age of 60.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79775280899 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69108877361 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52808988764 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.813152079 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25173749952 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912784223597 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093445891353 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181557776779 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082053113761 0.056905535591 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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