Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Name and fame come with the success of superstars. Few stars believe that photojournalist should not interfere in the secrecy while at the same time other superstars are of an opinion that the invasion is what they have earned with recognition. I am of a viewpoint that the privacy of an individual, irrespective of the recognition and fame a person has earned, is foremost and should be maintained.
Celebrities are also humans and do live a life in which they want to spend some time with their family and friends without any intervention of the journalist and media persons. There are many cases where celebrities are involved in wrong rumours and pseudo pictures. Recently, there was news about an Indian television actress who committed suicide; the media presented the whole fact and the figure completely different in which the friend of the actress was shown as the culprit because of the pictures and content publicized wrongly.
Moreover, the youth receives a very wrong impression of the paparazzi and endeavour by any means to receive the same. They have many stars which they follow and try to copy their lifestyle.
However, the few stars like to get the attention of the media and consider it as a strategy to be in the limelight in the public. To an extent, we tend to forget those whom we do not find in the daily story or we try to be inquisitive if there is any news about the celebrities we like.
To capitulate, I still have a consideration that invading in any individual’s life is not right as everyone wants some space for themselves. They are looked upon by the public and individuals want to know about the lifestyle of their favourite stars but all the humans have a right of freedom to showcase what one wants to do.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7385620915 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81309345911 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535947712418 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.094220373 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109281086912 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401500580355 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028153046157 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573471115749 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035253436666 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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