Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
The biggest problems around the world that can be foresighted are of environmental calamity, high population and poor education. These factors are predominantly ruining the future of the countries. These reasons make the countries live with a tag of developing nations. My country is also in the race of these limitations and will severely face a challenge of environment support which in turn will affect other propositions of growth.
The current population of my count is quite high, it has recently been named as an overpopulated country in the Asian countries leaving china also behind. Due to overpopulation, the essential resources provided to the people are less. The population will require the basic necessity of food, cloth and house. To provide the same, the environment will be compromised. More trees will be cleared to give the shelter; less food will be available due to fewer trees which will affect the rains also. Lack of basic resources will not let the individual educate. There will be more crime, exploitation for survival. Poverty will make its space higher.
All these problems can be eradicated eventually; Government should initiate stringent actions on the population control. Birth of children should be restricted to two per family. Awareness session on birth control factor should be given. Free birth control pills and condoms should be made available at medical shops. Tomorrow’s future with a lack of resources should be shown in the form of movies and theatres. r
To conclude, Control over essential factors of livelihood should be taken into consideration for a visionary future. The government should play a major role in limiting the factors responsible for the destruction of the country. A right vision and mission can improve the tomorrow of a nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...fewer trees which will affect the rains also. Lack of basic resources will not let t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: R
...own in the form of movies and theatres. r To conclude, Control over essential f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wn in the form of movies and theatres. r To conclude, Control over essential fact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24221453287 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94981024663 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7280002239 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.45 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 7.06120827912 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335820859486 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937358938138 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695586273814 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190367998216 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113431674063 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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