Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor What are some of the reasons for world poverty How can the poor be helped Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge o

Essay topics:

Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Poverty has one of the major issues around the globe. All the countries have this concern about poverty and have different solutions to tackle with the poor people. Although, there are various factors which are responsible for world poverty but then again there are many possible way outs also. I would like to discuss some of the reasons and solution to the same.

There are many factors responsible for poverty including overpopulation, inadequate food supply in comparison to demand, poor education and any other reasons. The population of the country is the foremost factor for poverty because it leads to the inadequate supply of required resources. The family is unable to meet the food requirement on a daily basis. Poor education also leads to the road of poverty; the earning member in the family becomes less in comparison to the surviving members due to unemployment.

The government can assist in reducing poverty in a country by making strict laws with respect to the family planning to control the population. It can also create jobs by making a reservation in all the companies to hire the talents from the economically weaker section of the society. Subsidies on the houses for the weaker sections can be given. Individuals can also contribute to reducing this problem by making every member of the family educated and earning. In a study, it was found the world poverty is a big problem and there is a governing body being formed by various countries being the participant to take various measures in tackling the same

To conclude, Individuals and the government, both play a vital role in reducing or helping the weaker section of the society.

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Average: 6.3 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... again there are many possible way outs also. I would like to discuss some of the re...
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Line 2, column 320, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... way outs also. I would like to discuss some of the reasons and solution to the same. T...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01433691756 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72601793886 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.482457534 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269730830562 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866654804994 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471872265391 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135982833719 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706694674618 0.056905535591 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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