You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
Dear Sir,
This is in connection to the brochure I received with my newspaper for a week walking tour in the mountains. Trekking and mountaineering have always been my hobby and passion. I would like to understand more details about the tour including price, dates, fitness level.
From my childhood, I have been a trekker and never miss an opportunity to participate in any of these tours. I have the walking tour in Himalayas, Aravali’s and many more. For this tour, the brochure does not state anything about the price, dates and the medical fitness requirement. Please share the details of the same. I would also like to tell that recently about 15 days before, I had a strain in my right foot and doctor has asked for a 20 days’ rest.
I would like to know that whether I can attend the tour after my rest time. Look forward to your revert on the same with all the details.
Thanking you.
Yours faithfully
Megha Gupta
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68072289157 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6228351157 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626506024096 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1762879923 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6363636364 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143368402955 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611150085993 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752929243314 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075192521507 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288442413318 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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