With the growing inflation rate, nowadays everyone needs to work to meet their ends meet. Moreover, there are people around the world who prefer to work due to self dignity rather than spending their children’s money. However, some people believe that this trend may cause shortage of jobs for young generation, which I personally think is a complete illogical thought. This essay will evaluate the statement given above and will present my opinion as the conclusion.
Firstly, everyone has a right to work till anytime they want. No restrictions can be put on people who have aged 60 to refrain them from working. Apart from this, as elder people have more experience and expertise, they are far more capable than young workers to achieve successful outcome.
However, successful results also require a lot of energy and a will to work harder and these requirements can be fulfilled by newer generation of workers. Hence, a perfect blend of energetic and experienced people is more likely to succeed than a group of only young or old people.
Next, lifetime experience of old people can help youngsters in various ways. Therefore, I believe, the governments and educational institutions should identify such people to hand-over their skills to the youngsters in order to continue their legacy.
Lastly, having said that, not all the people have any rocket-science experience but they still like to work after their 60s just to make some money in order to have a normal lifestyle. Most of such people work to maintain their self-esteem and they don’t have any carrier aspirations or desire for growth. Therefore, they cannot be seen as troublemaker or a threat to the young.
In essence, everyone has a fundamental right to live their lives their way. If an old person wants to work, then they shouldn’t be stopped doing so, instead arrangements should be made to put the exposure of their experience on young people, so that they could be benefitted.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08588957055 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78905044122 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601226993865 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8819236392 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205133017563 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662430270781 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501953761583 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102953699825 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422878280555 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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