Since the inception of globalization and the internet, tourism has emerged as one of the most profitable sectors in many countries. Moreover, since when people have started to use the internet, more awareness is spreading among people about international travel. To attract more and more people, many countries provide multiple facilities to tourists such as Visa on Arrival as well as cheap accommodations. This essay will discuss the benefits and as well as drawbacks of this trend.
Firstly, travel wasn’t very popular in old times due to the hardships and lack of proper transportation facilities. However, this is not the case anymore and since when the new ways of transportation facilities such as high-speed trains and airplanes, etc have come into the picture, people are willing to see the world more than ever. Apart from this, there are various countries around the globe, whose entire economy depends on the tourism sector. Hence, to attract more and more tourists, they promote tourism as well as facilitate it.
Next, nowadays tourism is considered one of the most significant industries in any country. Tourism has an important role in boosting local as well as the national economy of the host country. With the foreign money flooding in, people from the host countries usually take their business to the next level and also enhances their lifestyles.
Lastly, though there are many advantages to the tourism industry, not many but some of its drawbacks may not be ignored. As per the research conducted by ABC University, less popular tourist places remained unspoiled more years than those which are quite popular to visit. This research shows that people tend to destroy a beautiful place before moving to a new place.
In essence, tourism has become one of the most prominent sectors around the globe undoubtedly and helps people to experience new cultures. Moreover, it also helps immensely to improve the local people’s lifestyle. While on the other hand, tourism doesn’t have any detrimental effects on the host country, given the fact that they maintain their tourism spots constantly. Hence, in my opinion, the benefits of tourism certainly outweigh the drawbacks.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26553672316 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76009373015 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3867520722 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272248166841 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787063942558 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901735824259 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140602375526 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658556728215 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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