Global warming has emerged as the most threatening situation for the world. The countries from around the globe have a reckoning about this problem and taking different measures to improve the situation. While some people believe that a rise in fuel prices will make people stop using their vehicles which will eventually have a positive effect on the environment, I don’t agree with this suggestion. This essay will discuss given point of view and produce a conclusion as per my understanding.
Firstly, though environmental problems are increasing undoubtedly day by day and humans as well as different animals and birds have to face issues like drought and tsunami almost every year nowadays, fuel-burning isn’t the only reason for these issues.
Secondly, if governments agree with this proposal, it will not help to stop running the vehicles as the world will come to a standstill if transporters refuse to run their vehicles but it will only increase the transportation costs which will lead to higher end cost to the consumers. Furthermore, as per the research conducted by Oxford University, only 2% of the total greenhouse gases come from the fuel burning. The rest of these gases generates by burning stubble, heavy usages of electronics such as refrigerators and ACs and cutting down the forest trees.
Lastly, instead of raising the fuel prices up, governments should spend their time, funds and efforts researching new ways of clean energy. The governments, in fact, should consider raising the rates of electricity units to put a check on the heavy usage of electronic items.
In essence, raising fuel prices will not help to resolve environmental issues. In my opinion, countries should come together to discuss these problems and should come up with a concrete plan to stop the damage that is being done by all of us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12582781457 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82807821716 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58940397351 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8879073343 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172503151327 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550288269974 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474504602559 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902451954786 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136561992274 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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