Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.
What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
it hast taken miljons of years to form world's ecosystem and bio-diversity. humans and nature used to be in harmony but since invention of money and different technologyes it has went out of balance. overpopulation and human influence have driven many speaces to extinction. it is clear that we need to think smarter and regain the balance with the nature.
overpopulation is a big problem for both to nature and humans themselves. we need land and resorce to support population, wich will gorve over 8 billjon in next 5 years. Some areas wich used to be covered with forest and complex multifauna have been burned down and converted to large cityes. Every year more babys will born and more land needs to be taken from wilderness. As a result many spices have died out. For examle, it took just 100 years to kill last moa bird in New Zealand. Before arrival of human settelers the moa had only few preditors like eagle. After last moa was killed so died eagles who dieted form moa birds.
The fact is human influence have killed many spices around the world. Mainly because overpopulation. Solution is in our hands. we need to cut down our populatin atleast 50 procente. For instance, if we would have only one child per couple human population would decrease by half in hundered years. china had restrict law about that. Popultaion of china did slow down dramatically.
worlds eco system is realy fragdale. In order to protect spices what are left in planet we need to cut down our population. if we do not mass instinction will accurr.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75092936803 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60810807279 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631970260223 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.140291986 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0909090909 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.2272727273 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115126714763 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326403546997 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448543588147 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774663346056 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458862274173 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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