Information revolution has changed the way of mass communication and had some positive and negative effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
From last decade, human's life has changed significantly with the inception of information technology. Considering this, some people believe that it has numerous detrimental effects on people's life while, other argue that this has brought enormous benefits for the evolution of human lifestyle. This essay will assert both viewpoints before delivering a plausible conclusion.
To commence, people who are entirely against this development of mass communication claim that with the advent of technology their security in under threat which might result into stealing of their personal data. Moreover, young generation is also likely to adopt western culture with the utilization of mass communication which consequently lead to extinction their own culture and ethics.
However, a segment of society consider that information technology has assisted them in various aspects of their life. To exemplify, human these days, are favored with an easy way of communication process through internet which enable them to do video conference with their kin and kith living at far distance. Furthermore, it is also helpful for the students for their online study as they can access to several online academic material.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that though mass communication has some drawbacks but, its numerous advantages cannot be neglected. Therefore, government should take some initiatives to ensure the eradication of weak points.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73515981735 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97093641265 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684931506849 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0537456822 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.6 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126452991728 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457247270434 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295631862634 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715519463209 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114116060416 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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