The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements?
Recently, internet has been evolved as a great tool of communication. By using it we can communicate with our friends and family whatever the distances is. However, sometimes it helps to confine some people in virtual world and discourage to mingle with the society. I do fully agree that internet has a lot of excellent positive outcomes like distant connectivity but it has some negative aspects too which could be appeased by proper education.
There is no way to refuge that internet has offered a lot of facilities to us. First of all, the business organisations can now reach to their customers using it and can get instant feedbacks from their customers which is not possible from others modes of mass communication medias like television or newspapers. This information help the manufacturer to launch new products and to design new services according to the market demands. Secondly, in personal level internet facilitates us to stay connected with our friends and families. By using social websites like Facebook, WhatsApp and so on we can now stay connected and share our feelings and opinions with audio-visual contents. For example, my cousin stayed connected all the time through social media during his four days Europe tour.
However, every positive thing has some negative aspects and Internet is not an exception of that. Ironically, social websites many a time are making us unsocial. Some people are so obsessed with the utopian virtual world that they often give priority of virtual friends over the real friends and family members. They fail to understand that most of the things shared on the virtual world are not realistic and often exaggerated. I can remember one of my friend who is a technological savvy and a heavy user of social networks, but is really seen in any social gathering.
To conclude, internet has become an indispensable part of our life and for communication purpose we are now greatly dependent on it. However, despite of having some critical negative effects, internet has a lot of positive outcomes and the advantages have far outweighed the disadvantages. As far as I am concerned, by promoting proper education the negative outcomes could be minimised.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 330, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
...evision or newspapers. This information help the manufacturer to launch new products...
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Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I can remember one of my friend who is a technological savvy and a heavy user of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09116022099 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88977344686 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549723756906 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0657407303 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.388888889 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171783732923 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055103055965 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051977488362 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993291307824 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550275161276 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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